《新gre写作教程》ppt课件

GRE Analytical Writing,关于新GRE写作的几个重要概念,核心测试点：（OG P11）,Issue题目：,针对一般性话题提出观点，包含如何就话题进行回应提出 明确的写作要求。 任务： 评估话题 考虑复杂性 推理和实例展开论证并支持自己的观点,Argument题目：,依据具体题目要求对已有的论证进行评估。 任务： 论证是否符合逻辑,考试模式：,在所有GRE考试内容的第一项出现 Issue 30分钟 Argument 30分钟 所有AW的考题均出自于官方题库 www.ets.org/gre/revised/awtopics 每项满分6分，2012年开始启动e-rater计划,课时分配,Issue: 6节课 Language: 2节课 Argument: 2节课,几个学生经常问到的问题,GRE写作需要准备多长时间,GRE写作用模板会怎样,会死,GRE写作需要背范文么,不,GRE分数和字数有关系么,没,GRE借鉴别人的文章会被判抄袭么,会,网上有很多GRE写作的高频，要看么？,这个可以有,推荐几本GRE写作复习的参考书,OG The Economist TIME 民主的细节 重新发现社会 Elements of Styles A Peoples History of The United States 旧GRE官方题库范文,上课如何听讲,鼓励录音回家听,课间休息不答疑，有问题写纸条,如何与老师互动,互动提问的要求,不是你提的问题我都会回答，我回答的都是有意义的问题，不回答的问题，一般是没有什么意义的,如何避免提没有意义的问题,认真听课，你的绝大多数问题，其实都在课上回答了。不要为了提问而提问 对于其他门派的复习方法问题，不回答 例如：我听XXX老师说要这样 对于情商不高的问题（挑战我思路的问题），基本不回答 例如：夏总，你这个点讲错了。 你这么宣扬美国民主制度，难道美国的民主制度就没有缺陷么？ 你为什么这么自大？,如何避免GRE备考中出现自虐从而虐他的惨剧,不要钻牛角尖 ，很多问题是无解的 不要完美主义，你如果不能理解我的思路，索性就不要理解了 针对不会写的题目，请自我安慰：这个题不会考的，不会考的，不会的，不会的，夏总会保佑我的。 GRE考不好，还可以扫大街。Tomorrow is another day 面对自己的无知和无能的最为重要的社会底线，就是不要用自己的无知和无能去麻烦别人，即便你给了别人钱,GRE写作有什么捷径,死磕,那听新东方的课，或者说听你的课，对GRE提分帮助大么,不大,那么可以退班么？,试听期内 可以,鼓励鼓励我，听完你讲的，我都绝望了,从绝望中寻希望，人生终将辉煌,那你的课到底能帮助我们什么,为成为一个合格的知识分子，打下最为基本的理性思维和人文关怀,Issue的评分标准,Scoring 6,In addressing the specific task directions, a 6 response presents a cogent and well-articulated analysis of the issue and convey the meaning skillfully Articulates a clear and insightful position on the issue in accordance with the assigned task Develops the position fully with compelling reason and/or persuasive examples Sustains a well-focused, well-organized analysis, connecting ideas logically Conveys ideas fluently and precisely, using effective vocabulary and sentence variety Demonstrates superior facility with the conventions of standard written English (grammar, usage, and mechanics) but may have minor errors,回忆一下,Style Language,position,reason,examples,logic,analysis,写作时要避免发生的情况 （scoring 3及以下）,Vague or limited in addressing the specific task directions and/or in presenting or developing a position on the issue Weak in the use of relevant reasons or examples or relies largely on unsupported claims Limited in focus and/or organization Has problems in language and sentence structure that result in a lack of clarity Contains occasional major errors or frequent minor errors in grammar, usage or mechanics that can interfere with meaning,什么样的文章是3分以下,毛新宇,范文分析,6分范文分析,As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.,The statement linking technology negatively 立场明确 with free thinking plays on recent human experience over the past century. Surely 逻辑承接 there has been no time in history where the lived lives of people have changed 埋下伏笔 more dramatically. A quick reflection on a typical day 针对前文的change给出进一步扩展 reveals how technology has revolutionized 立场词 the world. Most people commute to work in an automobile that runs on an internal combustion engine. During the workday, chances are high that the employee will interact with a computer that processes information on silicon bridges that are .09 microns wide. Upon leaving home, family members will be reached through wireless networks that utilize satellites orbiting the earth对于上文的typical day中technology如何revolutionized the world给出具体描述. Each of these common occurrences could have been inconceivable at the turn of the 19th century再次表明立场.,逻辑结构,Technology changed human life,car,computer,Mobile phone,Technology changed human life,statement,The statement attempts to bridge these dramatic changes to a reduction in the ability for humans to think for themselves 重述题目. The assumption 挖掘题目成立的逻辑前提 is that an increased reliance on technology negates the need for people to think creatively to solve previous quandaries. Looking back at the introduction, one could argue that without a car, computer, or mobile phone与第一段出现的例子次序完全对应, the hypothetical worker would need to find alternate methods of transport, information processing and communication再次对应. Technology short circuits this thinking by making the problems obsolete给出technology让人们思考能力下降的原因，sub-point.,Technology changed human life,car,computer,Mobile phone,Technology changed human life,statement,However逻辑转折, this reliance on technology does not necessarily preclude the creativity that marks the human species 重复转折法. The prior examples reveal that technology allows for convenience. The car, computer and phone 一致性 all release additional time for people to live more efficiently. This efficiency 重复前词，顶真结构 does not preclude the need for humans to think for themselves.树立对立观点 In fact, technology frees humanity to not only tackle new pro