2017-2018学年高一英语新人教版必修1学案：unit 5 writing

Writing如何写人物描写文描写伟人或名人，就是要对伟人或名人的生平、主要事迹和贡献进行介绍，使读者对他们有一个更为清晰和全面的了解。首先，对伟人或名人的出生时间、地点或家庭背景等进行描述，时态常用一般过去时。其次，介绍伟人或名人的主要经历、事迹或主要贡献、成就等。写作时通常按照时间顺序来写，时态常用一般过去时。典型句式首段：开头即主题段，我们通常可以开门见山地介绍人物的出生及家庭背景(birthday，birthplace and family background)。常用表达：.was born on (in).；when he was a small boy；as a child；during his/her childhood；live/lead a happy (hard) life.中间段：中间段是开头段的拓展，我们常描述人物的外貌、性格特征和兴趣爱好或者按照时间顺序介绍人物的受教育情况及生平中的大事件等。常用表达：(appearance or character) good/ugly/ordinary­looking；kind/warm­hearted；far­sighted；bad­tempered；easy­going；diligent；humorous；attractive.(like or dislike) be fond/tired of；be crazy about；be interested in；love/enjoy/hate sth.(education or big events) graduate from；receive a doctor's degree；go abroad for further study；have a gift for；work hard at；devote to；be determined to do sth；win a prize in；make rapid progress in；do research on/into.结尾段：我们通常在总结段中对这一人物作出综合性的评价。常用表达：set sb a good example；be respected by.；think highly of；be honored as.；be considered/regarded/accepted as.；become a world champion at.根据下面表格中的内容写一篇100词左右的英语短文介绍美国前总统奥巴马。姓名巴拉克·奥巴马(Barack Obama)家庭父亲是肯尼亚黑人，母亲是美国白人出生时间1961年8月4日梦想当总统出生地点夏威夷檀香山(Honolulu，Hawaii)教育1988年考入哈佛法学院(Harvard Law School)，1991年获博士学位职业毕业后当律师、大学讲师，后来一直从政。2008年11月4日，在大选(the general election)中击败麦凯恩(John McCain)，成为首位黑人总统评价奥巴马的成功极大地激励了非裔美国人写作要点第一段介绍奥巴马的出生日期、地点。第二段描述奥巴马接受的教育、从事的职业。第三段描述人们对他的评价。范文示例Barack Obama，the son of a black father from Kenya and a white American mother，was born in Honolulu，Hawaii on August 4th,1961.When he was only a small boy，he dreamt of becoming the President of the United States.In 1988，he was admitted into Harvard Law School，where he gained his doctor's degree in 1991.After graduation，he worked as lawyer，lecturer and then took up politics.On November 4,2008，Barack Obama defeated John McCain in the general election and became the first African­American President of the United States.The success of Obama inspires African­Americans greatly.His achievements show that anyone can succeed as long as he works hard.,亮点点评亮点一：语言地道准确，运用了大量的高级词汇，如：be admitted into，take up，work as，dream of，inspire等。亮点二：运用了定语从句，如句.where he gained his doctor's degree in 1991；运用了条件状语从句，如句His achievements show that anyone can succeed as long as he works hard。这些复杂句式将分散的信息有机地结合起来，提升了文章的层次。请你根据以下材料，写一篇100词左右的英语短文，向外国朋友介绍孔子(Confucius)。出生：公元前551年生于鲁国，正值春秋时期去世：公元前479年，享年73岁身份：中国古代伟大的思想家和教育家，儒家学派的创始人政治理想：建立一个和谐人道的社会代表作品：论语(Analects of Confucius)影响：对中国的政治、经济及文化产生深远的影响参考词汇：儒家学派Confucianism；人道的humanistic；和谐的harmonious_参考范文Confucius，known as Kong Zi in China，is a great thinker and educator in Chinese history.He was born in the Lu State in 551 BC，when it was Spring and Autumn Period，and died in 479 BC at the age of 73.As the founder of Confucianism，Confucius devoted his whole life to building a harmonious and humanistic society.Analects of Confucius was his most famous work.Confucius has exercised lasting and deep influence on China's politics，economy and culture.Not only is Confucius the pride of China，but his thoughts and works also belong to the whole world.