2017-2018学年高一英语新人教版必修1学案：unit 4 writing

Writing如何写新闻报道新闻报道是指用客观叙述的方法，及时地传递新闻信息。此类文章可分为三段：1导语：简要地写出本消息中最有新闻价值的信息，主要是消息发生的时间、地点以及事件的基本情况等。2主体：消息的主干部分，将导语中涉及的事实详细展开，使消息更加具体可信。3结尾：对整篇消息进行小结、说明等。典型句式导语部分：(1)According to a recent survey，about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after graduation.根据最近的一项调查，大约78.9%的大学生想毕业后继续深造。(2)The weather being fine，a large number of people went to climb the West Hill.天气很好，很多人去爬西山。(3)Great changes have taken place in China.中国发生了巨大的变化。(4)Thanks to the Hope Project，great changes have taken place in this western country school.多亏了希望工程，西部的这所乡村学校发生了巨大的变化。主体部分：(1)To solve the problem，some measures should be taken.为了解决这个问题，(我们)应该采取一些措施。(2)As we all know，the Internet is playing an important part in our daily life.众所周知，互联网在我们的日常生活中起着重要的作用。(3)The number of the injured in the accident has reached more than 12.这场事故中受伤的人已经超过12个。结尾部分：(1)We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.我们应该不遗余力地美化我们的环境。(2)With the rapid development of society，our country will surely have a brighter future.随着社会的快速发展，我们的国家一定会有更光明的未来。(3)I suggest that the government should do something more to solve the serious problems.我建议政府应该为解决这些严重的问题做更多的工作。(4)We have every reason to believe that the development will be a great success.我们有足够的理由相信这次发展会很成功。5月1日，高二(3)班的学生志愿者李月和张华去阳光敬老院(Sunshine Nursing Home)开展志愿者活动(送鲜花和水果、打扫卫生、聊天等)。假如你是校英语报的记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则100词左右的新闻报道。1时间、地点、人物、活动；2老人们的反应；3简短评论。注意：报道的标题和记者姓名已给出(不计入总词数)。Student Volunteers BroughtSunshine to the Elderly_By Chen Jie，School Newspaper写作要点第一段报道事实时间、地点、人物、活动等第二段老人的反应对志愿者表示感谢第三段简短评论给他人带来了欢乐，也丰富了自己的生活范文示例Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the ElderlyOn May Day，Li Yue and Zhang Hua，students from Class Three，Grade Two，went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work.Upon their arrival，Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed，and respectfully，they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits.Then，they started working at once，cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor.Everything done，they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.When it was time for the volunteers to leave，the elderly people thanked them for their kindness.They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy.What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.By Chen Jie，School Newspaper,亮点点评结构分析：本则新闻报道包含了标题、导语、主体、结构四个部分，结构完整。时间、地点、人物、活动等新闻要素齐全且叙述简洁、客观，符合新闻报道的要求。亮点点击：亮点一：句Everything done，they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.为独立主格结构；句What they did has brought joy to.主语从句的使用使文章充实，而富有英语特色，高级语言的使用，显示了作者深厚的语言功底。亮点二：在语言表达上使用了did some voluntary work(句)，be warmly welcomed (句)，present sb with sth(句)，chat with sb (句)，thank sb for sth (句)，enrich one's life(句)等高级词汇和现在分词作伴随状语等高级表达，此外句还使用了such.that.状语从句，使文章语言丰富多彩又不失简洁。亮点三：使用了upon one's arrival(句)，then(句)，everything done(句)，When it was time for the volunteers to leave (句)等衔接词句，使文章过渡自然。星光中学(Xingguang High School)近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括：1时间与地点：4月10日，大青山(Daqing Mountain)；2活动的过程；3你对于这次活动的评论。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_ 参考范文In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise，our school organized a mountain­climbing activity on April 10.It was a nice day.At 8：00 am，we gathered at the foot of Daqing Mountain and set off for the top in high spirits.All the way we were chatting，singing and laughing，enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery.When some fell behind，others would come and offer help.About 2 hours later，we all reached the top.Bathing in sunshine，we jumped and cheered with joy.The activity is of great benefit to us.Not only does it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work，but also it promotes the friendship among us.What a wonderful time！