2017-2018学年高一英语新人教版必修1学案：unit 3 writing

Writing如何写电子邮件电子邮件(email)与一般信件一样，包括开头、正文和结尾部分。它具有阅读方便、传递快捷以及内容简短的特点。1必须在“收件人(To)”框中输入收件人的email地址，如Jim 1992 pep.com.cn。“主题(subject)”框最好不要空着，它应该是邮件内容的简明概括，可以是一个单词、一个短语，也可以是一个完整的句子。2email正文前的称呼。在同辈的亲朋好友或同事间可以直呼其姓，如Prof.Smith。写电子邮件要直接，并多用短句，以使意思清楚。当然，要详细介绍重点部分。如果内容过多，可以以附件的形式发出。3根据邮件正式与否选择合适的结尾。与书面信函不同的是，email的结尾可以不署名，尤其是给朋友、同学等熟人时，同时无须写出时间；邮件末尾客套用语通常也只需要一两个词，如Thank，Best wishes等。典型句式1开头：Thank you for./I'm glad to receive your letter dated./I'm so sorry that I couldn't write earlier./How are you getting along with your study？/With great pleasure I learn that./I'm writing to ask if.(to tell you./to apply for the job.)2结尾：I'm looking forward to receiving (longing to receive) your reply./All my best wishes to you./Remember me to your parents./Good luck to you.Thank you again.3邀请：Could you come to.？/I should very much like you to join us.4委婉拒绝： I'd love to come，but I can't because./I'm really sorry to say.5回复求助：In my opinion，you should.假设你是李华，你的新西兰朋友尼克(Nick)将于八月来四川旅游，特发来电子邮件询问有关旅游景点的情况。请根据下表所提供的要点，回一封电子邮件，并表示盼望他的到来。旅游资源许多世界著名的风景名胜，如九寨沟(池子：清澈见底，色彩斑斓)；都江堰水利工程(2 000多年的历史；仍在发挥作用)相关信息气候适宜，交通方便注意：1.词数100左右，电子邮件的格式及开头已为你写好(不计入总词数)。2可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：省province；池子lake；都江堰水利工程Dujiangyan irrigation systemDear Nick，I'm glad to hear that you're coming to Sichuan in August._Yours sincerely，Li Hua写作要点首先说明四川有旅游优势，然后分别叙述旅游景点和便利条件，最后表达出期盼尼克到来的心情。范文示例Dear Nick，I'm glad to hear that you're coming to Sichuan in August.You've made the wise choice to come here.Sichuan Province is rich in tourist attractions and many world­famous places of interest，such as Dujiangyan irrigation system.Jiuzhaigou is well­known for its beautiful lakes，of which the water is clear and looks colourful.It can inspire visitors' imagination.Another attraction is Dujiangyan irrigation system.It was built over 2,000 years ago and is still playing an important part in the irrigation today.Besides，the nice weather and convenient transport here can make your trip more enjoyable.I'm sure you'll have a good time！I'm looking forward to your coming!Yours sincerely，Li Hua,亮点点评该篇文章把握住了说明文的特点。要点齐全，思路明晰，说明有条理，符合电子邮件的写法。同时，文中出现了很多好的搭配，如be rich in，places of interest，be well­known for，play an important part in等，为文章增色不少；besides的使用使文章衔接更自然；are coming为现在进行时表将来，运用恰当。另外，高级句式that引导的宾语从句、of which引导的非限制性定语从句，都是文章的亮点。总体上说，这是一篇相当不错的文章。假如你叫王华，你和表哥张越约好今年暑假一起去云南丽江旅游。现在请你根据下面的要点提示给他写封电子邮件，告知旅游安排。17月15日和他一起坐飞机到昆明，再去丽江；2参观当地著名风景名胜，购物，品尝风味小吃；3昼夜温差较大，带足保暖防寒衣物。注意：1.要点齐全，可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯；2词数100左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Zhang Yue，As is scheduled，we are to visit Lijiang in Yunnan Province this coming summer holiday._Hope we'll have a good time there.Yours faithfully，Wang Hua参考范文Dear_Zhang_Yue，As_is_scheduled， we_are_to_visit_Lijiang_in_Yunnan_Province_this_coming_summer_holiday.I'm sure you're looking forward to the trip，just as I am.Now I'll tell you my arrangement for the trip.On July 15th，we'll fly to Kunming，the capital of Yunnan，from where we'll go to Lijiang by bus.Upon our arrival，we'll visit the famous tourist attractions there，which enjoy high popularity among tourists.There are many legends attached to the places，and the beautiful scenery there will prove a feast for us.Meanwhile，we can buy some local products as souvenirs.We can as well take advantage of the chance to have a taste of local food as well as its culture.As there's a big difference in temperature in the day and during the night，it's recommended that you take some warm clothes.Hope_we'll_have_a_good_time_there.Yours_faithfully，Wang_Hua