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高考英语作文专题书面表达评分标准 一、评分原则 1、 本题总分为30分，按5个档次给分。 2、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确 定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡 量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 3、词数少于80或多于120的，从总分中减去 2分。 4、评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点 ，应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、 上下文的连贯及语言的得体性。5、拼写与标点是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。 二、各档次的给分 范围与要求第五档（很好）2530分Ø完全完成了试题规定的任务。 Ø覆盖所有内容要点。 Ø应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。Ø语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复 杂结构或高级词汇所致；具有较强的语言运用能力 。 Ø有效地使用了句间的连接成份，使全文结构紧凑。 Ø完全达到了预期的写作目的。 第四档（好）（19-24分）u完全完成了试题规定的任务。 u虽然漏掉一、二个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内 容。 u应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的需要。 u语法结构和词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误 主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。 u应用简单的语句间的连接成份，使全文结构紧 凑。 u 达到了预期的写作目的。第三档（适当）（13-18分）Ø基本完成了试题规定的任务。 Ø虽然漏掉了一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。 Ø应用的语法结构或词汇能满足任务的要求。 Ø有一些语法结构或方面的错误，但不影响理解 。 Ø应用简单的语句间的连接成分，是全文连贯。 Ø整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。三、说明1、内容要点可用不同方式表达。 2、对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。 3、书面表达的内容须符合逻辑、语言得体 。l审题，抓住文章写作要点。l确定应用文体和格式。书信、日记、通知（ 分书面通知和口头通知）。l划分段落，确定段落内容。（主题 句)l确定段落的主题句，用好 “启、承、转。合 ”的词语和句子，多使用英文的习惯用语和短 语。l注意书写的规范。检查是否有错误（单词拼 写，语法）步骤：已找到的住处11 芳草街下一站 建新华文学校20032003年年 NMET NMET 书面表达书面表达假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市 的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房 。请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房 面积为25平方米,月租500元。注意：1. 词数100左右; 2. 参考词汇：房租 rent (n.) 1 2 3Dear Bob,Thanks for your litter. Im glad that youre coming to the new building Huawen school for learning Chinese. I was fond of you a horse . It is closed to your school in No. 11 Fan Chao Street.Your horse is in two flours. It have 3 rooms, a chicken, a restroom and a mens room. In the rest room , it has a bed, a long chair and a dest, the horse is 25 square miles. You pay 500 for a mouth. If you go to school , you pick up 11 bus and take down the next stop. I wish you would be like this. Yours Li Hua letter.to learnhave found flat close Fangcao flatJianxin Chinese Schoolkitchen,bedroom and a bathroom.bedroomtheres sofa desk.The flatmeters. The rent is 500 yuan a month.can take a No.11 bus and get off at hope you willon the 2nd floor withFind the errors and correct themFind the errors and correct them-Big Es: 语法结构 时态 语态语气 连词 要点Small Es:介词 冠词 标点 拼写Dear Bob,Ive found an apartment that is simply satisfactory! The apartment available is on the 3rd floor of a unique pink building in Fangcao Street. 25 m² - enough, right? You will have a living room, a bathroom, as well as a well- equipped kitchen. You wont have to purchase more furniture for the apartment, which has in it a bed, a sofa, a desk plus a chair. From the balcony, you can see a bus stop just below, where you can take a No.11 bus and get off at the next stop near which the school is located. The rent is 500 Yuan per month. Looking forward to your arrival!Yours, Li HuaDear Bob,Ive found an apartment that is simply satisfactory! The apartment available is on the 3rd floor of a unique pink building in Fangcao Street. 25 m² - enough, right? You will have a living room, a bathroom, as well as a well- equipped kitchen. You wont have to purchase more furniture for the apartment, which has in it a bed, a sofa, a desk plus a chair. From the balcony, you can see a bus stop just below, where you can take a No.11 bus and get off at the next stop near which the school is located. The rent is 500 Yuan per month. Looking forward to your arrival!Yours, Li HuaWell-polished sampleWell-polished sampledescriptive descriptive words words Less ordinary Less ordinary nouns 2. 词数100左右。Dear Editor,Im writing to tell you about the recent discussion that weve had on whether people should keep pets at home in cities.Thanks for reading the letter.Yours truly,Li Hua 仔细研读作文指令要求及注意事项, 在抓准各要点的同时,分析 它们的主次关系以确立论点和论据。必要时,可以画出提纲图。如：论点： 养宠物好 养宠物不好论据：结论：安慰孤 独者学会和 动物相 处增强责 任心伤人吵闹污染增添生活情趣花钱 添负担个人观点：可养宠物，但要避免其不良影响。Reasons for keeping pets Reasons against keeping petsoffer offer good good company company teach teach people how people how to get along to get along well with well with animals animals teach teach people people to be to be responsible responsible bad for the bad for the environment environment noisy noisy attack attack people people make our life interesting make our life interesting a lot of work a lot of work + a waste of money + a waste of money Personal opinion: I like keeping pets Personal opinion: I like keeping pets but we should take measures to prevent something bad. but we should take measures to prevent something bad. Dear Editor,Im writing to tell you about the recent discussion that weve had on whether people should keep pets at home in cities.Thanks for reading the letter.Yours truly,Li HuaSome students think it a good idea to keep pets because they offer good company for people who are lonely. Besides, owning them teaches us how to get along well wit