WCET writing分析及辅导
WritingCET 4 大学英语四级满分710分，其中写作占15%， 满分为106分。 能在阅读难度与课文相仿的书面材料时做笔 记、回答问题和写提纲，能就一定的话题或 提纲在半小时内写出120-150词的短文，能 写短信或便条，表达意思清楚，无重大语言 错误。测试基本点大学英语四级作文主要考查: 1、学生组织英语语言的能力 2、和用英语表达思想的能力对于语言知识点的测试，主要体现在 1、测试基本词汇运用能力 2、测试基本语法点 英语四级考试作文的评分依据是：文章切题 ，条理清楚语言准确和字数符合要求，四级 作文的字数要求一般是不少于100字。 计分标准介绍：Ø大学英语四级的具体评分标准 Ø2分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大 部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 Ø5分基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。 有较多的严重语言错误。 Ø8分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚， 文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是 严重错误。 Ø11分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有 少量语言错误。 Ø14分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯 性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 Ø(注: 白卷, 作文与题目毫不相关, 或只有几个孤 立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分。) 1、基本形式 三段落式：按照题目提纲划分段落，提纲即是每段中心 句。 四级作文考试就是主题提纲写作。 2、评分标准及注意事项 切题：围绕该段所给的中心句（提纲）来写相关内容。 语言：（后面环节详解）。 连贯：运用列举法，使段落结构清晰；要避免使用 一些过于熟悉的词汇和短语；参考星火范文。 3、备考策略 备考目标：由句到段才是四、六级考查的核心问题，由 段中心拓展出分中心。 拓展手段：运用列举分类、细节说明、比较对照、正反 论证等手段，具体可以参看别人的范文。 4、临场写作技巧：黄金三原则 翻译提纲句作为中心句，放在段首；确定主体段落 ，主体段落要列举和分类，并运用连接词；加入醒目、 吸引评卷人眼球的细节信息，句子要正确、出彩 2013年12月四级作文1 作文一： For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to- face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. “Dear Andy-How are you? Your mother and I are fine. We both miss you and hope you are doing well. We look forward to seeing you again the next time your computer crashes and you come down-stairs for something to eat, Love, Mom and Dad.” 作文2 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on learning and then explain why education doesnt simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. “Once I learn how to use Google, isnt that all the education I really need?” 作文3 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in peoples life and explain the consequence of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. People are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see.社会现象题模版§1描述现象：段首句+现状+定性§2之分析原因(题中出现解释原因或因素要求)：段首句+for one thing,国家角度. for another,个人角度之分析影响(题中出现说明危害或意义要求)：段首句+for one thing, 国家角度. for another,个人角度§3建议：段首句+firstly, 国家建议. Secondly, 个人建议文章模板Recently it is widely accepted that / Currently wherever you go, you will hardly fail to find that A is becoming increasingly popular. 现象现状. It brings benefits to us(积极现象)/it does great harm to us(消极现象)/ is a delicate problem worth of discussion(客观 现象)中间段选择一(原因段)There are several reasons accounting for it. for one thing,国家角 度原因. for another,个人角度中间段选择二(影响段)The phenomenon results in the following consequences. for one thing,国家角度原因. for another,个人角度It is urgent/imperative/necessary that attention should be paid to the issue to do sth./ There is no denying that the tendency analyzed above will continue in the near future. firstly, 国家建议. Secondly, 个人建议. With proper laws and alert public, it will become a past as a matter of time.( 消极现象)/ With proper laws and alert public, it will be carried on in a good way. (积极或客观现象) For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.“Dear Andy-How are you? Your mother and I are fine. We both miss you and hope you are doing well. We look forward to seeing you again the next time your computer crashes and you come down-stairs for something to eat, Love, Mom and Dad.” Due to the wide use of computers and the development of Internet, more and more people like to chat on the Internet. We tend to pay more attention to electronic communication than to face-to-face contact. As electronic communication is not limited by space, we can chat with others where there is Internet with our tools such as computers, mobile phones and pads. However, when we chat with others online, we cannot express our feelings fully. Just as the picture shows, the parents cannot touch or hug their child. We know that body language plays an important role in our communication, but the electronic communication cannot do this. For example, when we are sad, we need more love and warmth, a real hug from our parents or friends can mean much more to us than just words through electronic communication. Therefore, though electronic communication brings convenience to our life, I still dont think the electronic communication can replace face-to-face c
