专题五　短文改错

2020版3年高考2年模拟（二轮）专有资源专题五 短文改错题组一Proofreading 1(2019河北石家庄二模)I went to buy some traditional Chinese medicine on last Sunday. Just before leaving the drugstore, I noticed that some foreigners seems to have difficulty communicate with the assistant. I went over to ask if I needed. The assistant told me that she couldnt make herself understand about how to boil the mixture correctly. Learning that I could give them the hand, they were relieved. Without some trouble, I translated that the assistant wanted to say. Both sides expressed thanks to me. I was delighted to help other. More importantly, as a Chinese, I felt proudly to see foreigners try traditional Chinese medicine.答案I went to buy some traditional Chinese medicine last Sunday. Just before leaving the drugstore, I noticed that some foreigners seemsseemed to have difficulty communicatecommunicating with the assistant. I went over to ask if I needed. The assistant told me that she couldnt make herself understandunderstood about how to boil the mixture correctly. Learning that I could give them thea hand, they were relieved. Without someany trouble, I translated thatwhat the assistant wanted to say. Both sides expressed thanks to me. I was delighted to help otherothers. More importantly, as a Chinese, I felt proudlyproud to see foreigners try traditional Chinese medicine.解析考查介词。此处last Sunday作时间状语不需介词,故去掉介词on。考查动词的时态。根据语境可知,此处指发生在过去的事情,故将seems改为seemed。考查非谓语动词。have difficulty (in)doing sth.为固定句型,故应把communicate改为communicating。考查动词的时态和语态。此处指我走过去问我是否被需要,根据语境,事情发生在过去,且从句的主语为I,故应添加was。考查非谓语动词。understand与herself为被动关系,故将understand改为understood。考查冠词。此处give sb. a hand为固定用法,故将the改为a。考查不定代词。without表否定意义,some常用于肯定句中,any常用于否定句或疑问句中,故将some改为any。考查名词性从句。此处引导宾语从句,且宾语从句中缺少say的宾语,而that引导宾语从句并不充当成分,故将that改为what。考查代词。此处指“其他人”,应用others,other表示“其他的”,故将other改为others。考查形容词。看到外国人尝试传统的中药,我感到骄傲。felt为系动词,后面应用形容词作表语,故将proudly改为proud。Proofreading 2(2019东北三省三校一模)You must have heard about Dolly and have been amazed by the first cloned animal. But here came a problem:should we clone humans? When being asked about this question, a large number of people which are interested in the topic hold the view that its beneficial to clone humans. Therefore, some other people, me including, are against this idea. Cloning humans can bring negative effects and wrong informations. In the first place, they may not be treated equal as normal people, which I believe will make him suffer a lot. In second place, human cloning may lead in some social disorder, and it is quite dangerous.答案You must have heard about Dolly and have been amazed by the first cloned animal. But here camecomes a problem:should we clone humans? When asked about this question, a large number of people whichwho/that are interested in the topic hold the view that its beneficial to clone humans. ThereforeHowever, some other people, me includingincluded, are against this idea. Cloning humans can bring negative effects and wrong informationsinformation. In the first place, they may not be treated equalequally as normal people, which I believe will make himthem suffer a lot. In second place, human cloning may lead into some social disorder, and it is quite dangerous.解析考查动词的时态。此处需要用一般现在时,而非一般过去时,所以将came改为comes。考查非谓语动词。people与ask为被动关系,且根据句意可知不是表示正在被问,所以将being去掉。考查定语从句。先行词为people,指人,所以应当用who或that来引导,而不是which。考查副词。根据前后两句关系可知,此处是转折关系而不是因果关系,所以将Therefore改为However。考查非谓语动词。me和include为被动关系,所以将including改为included。考查名词。information为不可数名词。考查副词。此处用副词修饰动词,所以改为副词equally。考查代词。前文提及they,根据前后一致原则可知,此处应为them,所以将him改为them。考查冠词。此处second是序数词,前面需要有形容词性物主代词或定冠词the来修饰。根据句意可知,此处需要加入the。考查动词短语。lead to为固定短语,意为“导致”。Proofreading 3(2018安徽合肥二次质检)Last Saturday our class went hiking in a countryside. We meet at our school gate and set off at 8:00 am. On the way, we were singing and laughing happily while a girl suddenly fell into a deep hole. She felt so frightening and even burst into tears. One of my classmate found a long rope and we finally got him out. Fortunately, she didnt suffer seriously injuries, but it seemed that her ankle slightly twisted. We managed to sending her to the nearest hospital. It is an experience well never forget it, though we didnt enjoy ourselves very much that day.答案Last Saturday our class went hiking in athe countryside. We meetmet at our school gate and set off at 8:00 am. On the way, we were singing and laughing happily whilewhen a girl suddenly fell into a deep hole. She felt so frighteningfrightened and even burst into tears. One of my classmateclassmates found a long rope and we finally got himher out. Fortunately, she didnt suffer seriouslyserious injuries, but it seemed that her ankle slightly twisted. We managed to sendingsend her to the nearest hospital. It is an experience well never forget , though we didnt enjoy ourselves very much that day.解析考查