2010福建高考英语写作分析
20102010 福建高考英语写作分析福建高考英语写作分析2010 福建高考英语写作分析猜中真题的背后 厦门新东方 教学与教材研发中心当 2010 年 6 月 8 日最后一门 高考英语结束后，广大莘莘学子结束了自己 12 年的求学生涯，而厦门新东方高中部也再次创造了辉煌，厦门新东方高中英语部自创立以来，一直以来以“对于考试规律的深刻理解；为厦门新东方高中英语教学理念“引领着厦门高中学英语教育工作。今年得到了巨大的回报。首先让我们看看 2010 年高考真题-英语（福建卷）的写作：这篇文章显然在形式方面：继承了 2009 福建高考写作的示意图的格式内容方面：继承了 05-06 福建高考写作的结构和流程而我们在最后的冲刺阶段 4 月-5 月之间将 04-09 年的福建高考真题逐一解析，并且我们的学员反复的练习。高考经典：书面表达（满分 25 分）高考资源网假设你是李华，福建省某中学高中学生，今年暑假将前往澳大利亚参加主题为 “WATER FOR LIFE“ 的交流活动。请你以参访代表的身份，根据以下图片提示，用英语写一篇发言稿：高考资源网高考资源网注意：高考资源网1 根据图片的内容适当展开，以使行文连贯；高考资源网2 开头与结尾已写好，不计入总词数；高考资源网3 文中不能出现考生的具体信息；高考资源网4 词数：120 左右高考资源网参考词汇：短缺 shortage ; 资源 resource高考资源网高考资源网Ladies and gentlemen,高考资源网Good morning, I'm Li Hua from Fujian, China, It's my great honor to be here to say something about the global water shortage and ways of dealing with it. That's all. Thank you.高考资源网One possible version高考资源网Ladies and gentlemen,高考资源网Good morning. I'm Li Hua from Fujian, China. It's my great honor to be here to say something about the global water shortage and ways of dealing with it.高考资源网As we know, the global water shortage is becoming increasingly severe mainly due to global warming, environmental pollution and the ever-increasing population. Therefore, it's high time we did something about it.句式：As we know . = It is known to us that .Firstly, an effective way, I think, is to reserve water in a scientific way for future use. Secondly, new methods need to be developed to use the existing water resources, for example, turning sea water into fresh water. Thirdly, we must stop water pollution by law. Last but not least, it's everyone's responsibility to make good use of water, such as recycling and saving water in our daily life.具体：1. In the first place （首先）- what's more（moreover） - last but not least （学员充分理解的最后）2. make full use of sth = take advantage of sth =高考资源网In conclusion, people around the world should be aware of the real situation of water shortage, protect the present water resources and explore potential ones scientifically. 高考资源网That's all. Thank you.高考资源网高考资源网核心词组： be aware of sth = raise the awareness of environmental protection（我们教给学生的）1 w.w.w.k.s.5.u.c.o.m www.Ks5u.com www.ks5u.com文章解析：现象分析-具体举措-这件事情的意义（呼吁或是号召）提示：That's all. Thank you.高考资源网高考资源网这是发言稿最后的结束用语。我们不难发现这与我们的 2009 年高三秋季高考精英教材：高三 VIP 精英 保送考 测试汇编一书的写作 ：第十八节：2009 年龙岩市普通高中毕业班单科质量检查书面表达（满分 25 分） 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇 120 词左右的英语短文。A new study warns that about thirty percent of the world's people may not have enough water by the year 2025. The demand for water keeps increasing. Yet the amount of water on earth stays the same.It's said that lack of water in the future may result in several problems. It may increase health problems. It may also result in more international conflicts. Countries may have to compete for water in the future. Some countries now get sixty percent of their fresh water from other countries.【写作要求】以“It is high time we saved water“为题写一篇作文，内容应包括：1. 水在生活中有何用处，请举一至两例加以说明；2. 你对节约用水的态度以及怎样才能节约用水。One possible version:It Is High Time We Saved Water1As is known to all, water is the source of life. Men as well as plants and animals depend water to live. Water is used for cooking, drinking, washing, swimming, farming and so on. 2However, it is high time we saved water now. With population increasing fast, more water is being needed; with more water being polluted, less water is available. If we don't save water, lack of water would cause terrible disasters to humans.3What can we do to save water ? Here are some measures to take.解析：这是文章的关键1.Here are some tips as follows2.Here are some measures that we should take .4Firstly, we should strengthen the sense of saving water. Secondly, we should try our best to protect water from being polluted. Thirdly, recycling water is an effective way to save water. (126 words)我们可以发现两篇从主题到文章的结构高度的一致。所以我们在厦门新东方秋季班学习的广大学员在今年的作文方面有着显著的提高。所以我们会始终的1
