高中考试英语读后续写微技能训练——如何写好人物情感动作

新高考读后续写高分素材-微技能之细节描写(一). 语言的丰富性1. 词汇、句式、语法的多样性句式结构：简单句，复合句以及强调句、倒装句等特殊句式的使用情况。语法结构：主被动语态、非谓语动词、独立主格结构、with的复合结构、虚拟语气的使用情况。词汇选择：常见初级词汇、高级词汇，以及不同词性的使用情况。修辞手法：比喻、拟人、夸张等修辞格的使用情况。【词汇精炼】赤手空拳bare hands 与斗争 fight with/against靠近approach 危险状况dangerous situation僵持状态deadlock 撤退，逃跑withdraw/run away威胁threat 在远处in the distance【佳句锤炼】他们两手空空，不敢与狼搏斗。With nothing on the hand, they dared not to fight against the wolf.与此同时，狼可能会感觉到周围人的威胁，所以它开始慢慢后退。In the meanwhile, the wolf might feel the peoples threats around, so it began to step back slowly.【句式升级】He saw the wolfs face near him. He used his fist to hit the face of the wolf strongly.Seeing the wolfs face so close to him, he hit it with all his strength/ heavily using his fist.2. 情感表达的多样性Macs feeling：Surroundings: Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal.Thoughts: He thought fondly of his wife“Man, thats a big dog!”Actions: Macs heart jumped.He fired at the wolf a second time, and againMac was pedaling hard now.He waved and yelled at passing cars.He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast,举例：如表达一个人的疲累时，可用概括描述：she felt exhausted. 同时辅以细节描述She felt exhausted and sat by the stream, resting her aching feet.“感到害怕”的细节描述当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我感到很害怕。1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。    _2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。 1） _2） _3） _ 参考答案：1.At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I felt very scared.2. 1）At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak. (嗓子发紧，膝盖发软)2）At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.(吓呆了，不敢动弹)3）At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating. (被深深地恐惧感所控制，手心出汗)表感到兴奋 thrilled当主持人宣布她获奖时，她兴奋极了。1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。    _2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。1） _2） _3） _ 参考答案：1.When the host announced that she won the prize, she felt thrilled.2. 1) When the host announced that she won the prize, her eyes twinkled with excitement.（激动得两眼放光）2) When the host announced that she won the prize, her heart was thumping with excitement. (激动得心砰砰跳)3) When the host announced that she won the prize, a wide excitement took hold of her. (兴奋不能自已)感到悲伤”的细节描述一听到那个坏消息，她悲伤不已。1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。    _2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。 1） _2） _3） _ 参考答案：1. Upon hearing the bad news, she felt extremely sad.2. 1）Upon hearing the bad news, her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks. (心痛，眼泪直流)2）Upon hearing the bad news, she, numb with grief, had trouble speaking. (悲伤到失去知觉，不能开口说话)3）Upon hearing the bad news, she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldnt help crying bitterly.(被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣)“感到开心”的细节描述当妈妈亲吻他时，小baby开心极了。1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。    _2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。1） _2） _3） _ 参考答案：1.When his mother kissed him on the cheek, the baby was happy/delighted/full of joy.2.1) When his mother kissed him on the cheek, it seemed as if the baby were on top of the world. (非常开心)   2) When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, his face beamed and his bright smile lit up the room. (眉开眼笑；笑容照亮房间)  3) When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, his eyes danced with joy and sweetness. (欢欣雀跃)"感到羞愧"的细节描述她感到非常羞愧。1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。_(答案见底部Key 1)2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。1）_2）_3）_(答案见底部Key 2)参考答案：Key 1: She felt ashamed.Key 2:1) She felt so ashamed that she could feel her face burning.(脸上滚烫)2) So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face. (血液涌上脸颊)3) So ashamed did she feel that she was close to tears. (快哭了)“感到生气”的细节描述Sheldon感到非常生气。1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。    _2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。1） _2） _3） _参考答案：