中考英语高分作文秘诀

中考英语书面表达训练,2008.6.4,学习目标,1.了解写作的篇章技巧，使文章具有整体性。 2.掌握常用的连接词或句型，令作文更有灵气3.通过学和练提高写作的技巧和自信。,Revision,记叙文的写作要素议论文和说明文要素应用文写作要素,记叙文的写作要素： 5W 1H,When Where Who What 开门见山，交待事情的.How Why 说明事情的经过，描述原因What 总结,议论文和说明文要素: 2W 1H,What-提出观点 （文章的中心句）Why-论述观点 （正面和反面或多方面）How如何做 （围绕观点，说明要求）What总结全文 （观点首尾呼应）,Revision,记叙文的写作要素：5W 1H议论文和说明文要素: 2W 1H应用文写作要素: 基于5W 1H 根据具体要求来确定,中考作文高分秘诀,1. 谋篇布局 写好篇章结构2. 运用连接词 赋予语言灵气,范文1： 在日常生活中你主动帮助你的父母做家务活吗？请你根据提示用英语写一篇80字左右的短文，描述你平时所做家务以及你对家务的看法。提示：1.扔垃圾 2. 扫地 3. 帮助妈妈做饭 4.洗衣服 5. 为花浇水 6. 饭后洗碗要求：语句通畅，语法正确。 不得逐句翻译。,谋篇布局写好篇章结构,满分作文 （10分）,As we all know, its important to help parents do housework during our daily life. I often help them do housework. I throw the rubbish away and clean the floor in the morning. I help my mother cook lunch . After supper, I always wash dishes . I think it can make my parents feel more enjoyable after work. I always wash clothes for my family. Besides, watering the flowers is also my duty. I like them very much and take good care of them. In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be.（即总括又阐明看法）,谋篇布局写好篇章结构,Middle 正文,Ending 结尾,concluding sentence 结论句-对全文的总结和概括。,supporting sentences支持句-用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、讨论,topic sentence 主题句 -说出文中的要点、核心问题,Beginning开头,Good beginning is half done.,1. 仔细审题，提炼和归纳主题句2. 开头万能句型：1) .plays an important part in the.2) As we all know, . becomes more and more.3) As everybody knows, .is one of the most.in . 4) Many people say that. But I dont think so.5) I will never forget the .,Make a topic sentence.,As everybody knows, smoking is bad for our health.,1、Smoking,As we all know, smoking is a bad habit.,Many students say smoking is fun, but I dontthink so.,Make a topic sentence.,Many people say that Christmas is more popular than the Spring Festival. But I dont think so.,I will never forget the Spring Festival.,The Spring Festival plays an important partin our life.,2. The Spring Festival,Make a topic sentence.,As we all know, English becomes more and more popular/ important.,Many people say its difficult to learn English.But I dont think so.,3. Learning English,Make a topic sentence.,4. To be a volunteer for the 26th Universiade,5. A School Trip,As we all know, the 26th Universiade is coming soon. I want to be a volunteer for it.,A volunteer plays an important part in the 26th Universiade.,I will never forget the school trip last week.,1. 与开头呼应，再次重申自己的观点, 注意避免重复句式。2. 结尾经典词组、句型： At last/ Finally . 最后 In a word, . 总而言之 In short, . 简言之 We hope that··· 我们希望 Lets try our best to . I believe if we can., . will be . What a .! / How.!,结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应,Make a concluding sentence,Keeping healthy,Helping others,Lets try our best to keep healthy. In short, its important to have good habits and keep healthy.I believe if we can help others, the world will be more and more beautiful.,Make a concluding sentence,Beijing,To be a green consumer,Lets try our best to be a green consumer. In one word, its necessary for us to protect the environment.How beautiful Beijing is!Why not come to Beijing and enjoy yourself?,范文2：2007年天津市书面表达考题,日前,由教育部,国家体育总局,共青团中央联合举办“全国亿万少年阳光体育运动” 启动仪式,其影响巨大,意义深远.你在本校参加了此项活动,请根据表格中所给信息写一篇英语短文.,注意:词数80100 个左右.2.短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数.3.短文须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐句翻译,可适当加入细节,可适度发挥,使短文通顺,连贯.4. 文中不得使用真实姓名,校名.参考词汇：the launching ceremony 启动仪式build up ones body strength 强身健体More effective 效果更好,“Millions of young students nationwide sports sunshine” launched on April 29, 2007.The teachers and students in our school were organized to watch the launching ceremony . After that, all of us went to the playground. We had different kinds of sports for an hour. Some took part in running, some played basketball and football, and some did exercises. We enjoyed doing sports so much that we all forgot the time. We really had a good time.,学生满分范文,优秀范文讲评,该文结构严谨, 思维清晰。 在内容及感想间使用了不同的时态:一般 过去时及一般现在时。 发挥适度,长句短句交叉使用,句式赋于变化,用词得体,有很强的可读性, 做到了naturally and clearly.,正文：语言简洁，层次分明,长句短句交叉使用最好。基础一般的同学要尽量使用简单句，文章算不上完美，但很实用。把握要点，层次清晰。注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自然，行文连贯，注意适当使用连词， 例如：and ,so ,or, but, become等等。,正文：巧用连接词，赋予语言灵气,按事情发展的先后或时间顺序 1）Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly 2）first, then/next, after that/ next, finally3) soon, suddenly, at that moment , as soon as, from now on, at the same time, not.until, before, after, when , while, during表示并列not only. but also, both. and, either .or, neither.nor，on (the) one handon the other hand,表示举例或补充1）for example 2）besides / whats more/ whats worse表示转折 however, but，although, instead of表示原因 thanks to, because of，because表示结果 as result (of) , so ，so.that, such.that, 表目的 in order to, so that表比较 the same as, than, of all .,Which sentence is better?I played football on the playground. I fell down and hurt my legs. 2. When I was playing football on the playground, I fell down and hurt my legs.,