读写任务评分标准解读

高考(广东卷)英语读写任务评分标准解读广东卷高考英语读写任务主要考查考生的篇章概括和语言表达能力，满分 25 分。今年读写任务的抽样平均分为 11.32，比去年略高。下面是 2008 年高考广东卷读写任务的考场评分标准。一、评分标准在评分时，应注意以下几个方面：1. 按照评分标准，实行分析综合法评分；2. Mike 的发言概括部分必须包括以下要点：(1)Some basic life skills are necessary for a freshman to adjust himself to the college life.(2)Mike loved college, which offers students good facilities and rich activities.(3)To Mike, the important thing is to get himself active in things. 3. 写作内容应该包括：(1)对中学生活的感受，考生可以泛泛而谈，也可以谈具体的某一方面；(2)想象中的大学生活，内容可以包括理想的大学、进大学的心情（如：兴奋、担心等）、理想的大学生活（包括校园环境、学习环境、师生关系、社团活动等）等；(3)概况中学生活与大学生活之间的差异，比如：大学生活更丰富、更自由，或大学生活更富有挑战性、更需要独立性等等。(4)给分时在通篇把握的基础上，考虑要点是否完整，语法是否规范，句型是否多样，词汇是否丰富。各档次的给分范围和要求：项目 分值 评分标准5 按照要求概括了原文的全部主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。4 基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。3 基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，但包含一些不相关的信息，有个别句子抄自原文。语言结构基本正确，行文比较规范。2 不能按照要求概括原文的主要信息，包含较多不相关的信息，有较多的抄袭。语言结构不够准确，行文不够规范。概括 0-1 没有按照要求概括原文的主要信息，基本是不相关的信息，大多数句子都抄自原文。语言结构不准确，行文不规范。18-20 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，内容丰富。词汇丰富，用词得当。能有效运用合适的语言结构，而且没有（或极少）语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性好。写14-17包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点主题明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。11-13 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点主题比较明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。7-10 包含题目所给的部分内容要点。主题基本明确，有些内容不准确或者不相关。词汇有限，有较多的用词错误。语言结构出现较多的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性一般。4-6 只包含题目所给的个别内容要点。多数内容不相关或者不准确。文章有些地方照抄源文。词汇贫乏，有较多的用词错误。大多数的句子出现语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。作1-3 只包含与题目所给要点内容有关的一些单词。主题不明确，文章基本照抄原文。词汇极其贫乏，基本不能正确用词。几乎没有正确的句子。篇章结构零乱。0 以下几种情况，给 0 分：(1)完全抄袭原文（或其它文章）(2)文不对题(3)只写一些零散的单词，完全没有表达完整的内容二、解读标准下面以 15 篇专家评分的考场作文为例，解读今年的评分标准。示例 1At first Mike didnt adjust himself well to the college life because of the lack of basic life skills and homesick. However, he got himself active in things and gradually enjoyed his new life.It is obvious that high school life is quite different from college life. We generally study the basic knowledge and seldom work out a project by ourselves. Additionally, most of us live with our parents and we arent independent enough to live alone. High school life is simpler than college life.However, college life is more challenges, Students not only studying their own majors but also learn how to realize their dreams. They meet more new friends and gradually go into the real society.I enjoy my high school life a lot, which provides me with lots of useful skills and valuable experience. But I discover that I still lack some important life skills, which requires me to improve myself. In order to adjust myself to the coming college life, I decide to gain more knowledge about the society and life skills. I will try my best to become an independent and mature college student.All in all, I am looking forward to the new college life. I will prepare myself well and make improvement bit by bit.专家给分：420。 评析：该篇作文属于第一档。其概括部分能按照要求概括了原文的主要信息。语言结构基本正确，行文基本规范。写作部分包含题目所给全部内容要点，主题明确，内容丰富，词汇丰富，用词得当。能有效运用合适的语 言结构，而且极少 语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性好。虽然写作部分有些许语法错误（其中 homesick 应该用名词形式，即 homesickness；college life is more challenges应为 challenging），但其篇章结 构严格按照写作内容分段写，较为直观，受到 专家的青睐，给了 20分的满分。示例 2According to what is mentioned that Mike shares his experience in his years of college. After the hard adjustment, he started to enjoy all the interesting activities in the college life.Actually, college life is quite different from high school life indeed. It reminds me of some unforgettable experience that having P.E. lesson together, going home together, copying others homework and so on.As beautiful the high school life is, I prefer to look forward for my college life. In my opinion, I will gain more freedom including playing and studying in college. I am eager to making practice to what I most interested in . All in all, what I love most is college life.Moreover, I realize some effective measures should be taken by myself to adjust to the new life because of the difference between college life and the high school life. Obviously, I should begin to study living alone which I dont need to consider then I was a high school student. As difficult there will be, I ought to try my best to overcome what happen without any assistance. Furthermore, the most important thing is I should make a daily list to make me adjust to college life, even social life quite easier.In any case, whether it is positive or negative, one thing is certain that I am ready to have my own college life.专家给分：3+16评析：该篇作文的概括部分基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息。语言结构基本正确，行文比较规范。写作部分包含题目所 给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。示例 3After hearing Mikes speech, I know how different between high school life and college life. In college, we should do and handle everything by ourselves. However, we will have a better study condition and make more friends in college.In my opinion, my high school life is so comfortable but unfree. I can not but admit that parents prepare everything for me makes me feel convenient. However, their carefulness sometimes let me drop in a sense of unfreedom and made me lack necessary life skills.As far as I concerned, college life is tot