2021届 高三二轮专题 新题型读后续写不同主题分析--人与人之间的信任 学案含答案

高三新题型读后续写不同主题分析-人与人之间的信任板块一-例文（陌生人的帮助）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。While driving, I sensed something wrong with my car. Pulling into the first parking lot I found, I stopped it and climbed out to assess the situation. My heart sank as I discovered that one of my rear(后面的) tires was flat.Id bought the secondhand car several months before, but it didnt include a spare tire. Although I knew I needed to purchase one, my schedule was so tight that I hadnt done it yet. Because I was working full-time in the emergency room at a local hospital and taking evening classes at a university fifty miles away.Now here I was, alone forty miles from home. In those days, cell phones were a luxury. I had no way to call for assistance.My spirits grew darker the minute I checked the place where I had pulled over. No one was around, except a rusty, red truck. It was getting dark. I had two options: stay in my car until morning or start walking in hopes of finding a convenience store with a pay phone. Neither option appealed to me.I about to grab my purse and set off on foot when a man came out from what seemed to be a law office. Pulling a set of keys from his pocket, he locked the office door, and then turned and saw me standing next to my car. I must have looked scared and confused as he headed straight toward me."Can I help you with anything?" he asked.Judging from his appearance I decided I could trust him."I have a flat tire but dont have a spare," I said, relieved to see him."I can help you remove the flat and then drive you to a tire shop to get it fixed," he said.I remembered the cautionary(告诫的) words my parents had drilled into my head: Never get in a car with a stranger."Thats okay," I said. "Thanks anyway."注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。The man shrugged, walked to his truck and drove away._Half an hour later, he was back._【答案】The man shrugged, walked to his truck and drove away. My heart sank as I watched him pull out of the parking lot and onto the street. Regretting bitterly, I set out on foot to find the nearest convenience store. Id barely walked ten steps when the truck pulled back into the parking lot. The man got out and walked over to me. “I cant leave you alone like this. Ill take the flat to the tire shop and get it fixed for you.”Half an hour later, he was back. “The tire store was closing just as I pulled in,” he said, coming over to my car. “I told them you were alone, and they agreed to stay and fix it for you.” “Thank you so much,” I said, watching as he replaced the wheel. “How much do I owe you?” “It cost eighty-five dollars because they had to replace the tire itself. The hole was too big to repair.” Eighty-five dollars! That would put a serious burden on my budget. Yet I was grateful for all hed done to help a stranger.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，作者独自在外车胎瘪了，几乎没有人，在天快黑时一个男人愿意帮助作者把车胎拆掉并且送他去轮胎店修理，这事作者想起来了父母和他说过不要和陌生人一起上车。【详解】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：那人耸耸肩，走到他的卡车前，开车走了所以本段应该写这个男人开车走后作者的心情，以及之后男人还会做出怎么样的举动，是否会返回。第二段的开头是：半小时后，他回来了所以本段应该写这个男人回来之后是如何帮助作者以及和作者之间关于修轮胎的对话，作者最后很感激这个人为帮助一个陌生人所做的一切。续写时还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。按要求完成写作任务。【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式: 运用原因状语从句It cost eighty-five dollars because they had to replace the tire itself. 运用省略that引导的定语从句Yet I was grateful for all hed done to help a stranger.高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。版块二-读后续写精彩词句集锦好句当威廉看到时脸色苍白Williams face paled when he saw丽贝卡的脑子一片混乱，试图想出一种做某事的方法。Rebeccas mind raced,tryingto think of a way to do sth.她突然想到一个主意。An ideapopped intoher head.一道奇怪的光充满了他的眼睛。Astrange light filled his eyes.柜台后面是一位老太太，她帮我找到了我祖父的唱片。Behind the counterwas an old woman,whohelped me find my grandfathers records.我不知道这次旅行会是一次特别的旅行。Little did I know thatthis trip was going to be a special one.我哭了，担心车子抛锚了，我们就困在这里了。I cried,fearing thatthe car had broken down and wed stuck here.好奇心驱使我问。Curiosity drove me to ask.我感到脸颊上的热气烧得通红。I felt the heat in my cheeks burning red.如果不是我的粗心，这一切就不会发生了。（如果不是，某人就不会做）Had it not been formy carelessness, all thiswould not have happened.(Had it not been for., sb wouldnt have done.)一想到晚上独自一人，他就发抖。The idea of being alone in the night made him tremble.“要是我能找回那种好心情就好了，”她叹口气想。“If onlyIcouldget that good feeling back,”she thought, sighing.熟悉的泥土的气味升起来迎接她。Familiar smells of the earth rose up to greet her.我记得我的第一次钓鱼之旅，仿佛就在昨天。I remember my first fishing tour,as ifit were but ye