大学英语四级写作全解课件

大学英语四级写作,Bear, School of Foreign Languages, CSU,大学英语四级考试题型,1. 大学英语四级考试写作要求,目前指导大学英语教学的大学英语教学要求中规定，一般要求（一般要求是高等院校非英语专业本科毕业生应达到的基本要求，也就是四级要达到的水平）的英语书面表达能力为：能用常见的应用文体完成一般的写作任务，能描述个人经历、事件、观感、情感等，能就一般性话题或提纲在半小时内写出120词的短文，内容基本完整、用词恰当，语篇连贯。能在一般或应用写作中使用恰当的写作技能。,2. 四级写作评分原则及标准,2.1. 评分原则： CET作文题采用总体评分方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分,而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。 从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体，作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而确切地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。 本题满分为15分,阅卷标准共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。 阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数（如8分）相似，及定位该分数（即8分）；若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数则可加一分（即9分）或减一分（即7分）。但不得加或减半分。,2.2. 评分标准 2分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误 5分基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重语言错误。 8分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 11分切题。 表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。,Example,2011.12 Youre allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. Ive done it hundreds of time. Youd write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.,2 分,Why the some people nothing succeeds without a strong will? In my view they are not hard go to something. On the one hand they are not ability. On the other hand they are not to face they myself. in other words they are not to run the dream, as we all know, have dream people can be succeeder, in my view, it is necessary for us to do the dream. The more nothing succeeds the more not dream. We are not only deriver dreams but also go to hard, this is there we are have succeeds. if the one on the humorous “quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. Ive done it hundreds of times” we are have to succeeds. All in all, we are not the dream, we are have to fair, generally speaking the people go to the dream, we are know.,5 分,“Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world, Ive done it hundreds of times.” Its a humorous saying, but actually the true is serious and difficult. As everybody know, “Rome was not built in one day. Before it became Romer, there was a long way to through. Whether you can arrive the final place, it depends on whether your heart deeply stick with a strong will. Numbers of successful people in history depressed ours by what they do. We look up them, listen their stories but we must know everyone succeed had a strong will when they were young. What we need to do is this confirm what your goal is, make it a will and pay for it with your action. Dont give up any time you were tried and worried. Practice makes perfect, you can get rid of the inconfidence by doing all right things. Nothing succeeds without a strong will. The will neednt so big but so strong.,8 分,As is known to all, where there is a will, there is a way. However, there are also many people fail to achieve their dreams. Many people will say, its because they have not good condition or they have not luck chance. In fact, they just have not the strong will to succeed. Take quitting smoking for example. It has been a world-wide problem that thousands of millions peoples health is been destroyed by smoking. At the same time, we always see many people who have taken action to quit smoking but fail in the time. Because they cant forget the feeling of smoking, and they have not strong will to insist it. Only if the one who has strong will, will he succeed in quitting smoking. To conclude, no pains, no gains. We will have our dream come true by our strong will, and nothing succeeds without a strong will.,11 分,As a humorous saying goes, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. Ive done it hundreds of times.” This is, of course the fact, but it also tells us that without strong will, nobody can achieve success. No matter what way you choose, you will surely meet many difficulties. Life is not only filled with victory. Take the saying for example again. Once you start quit smoking, you will face a difficult choice every time others pass you a cigarette. Such a dilemma may make you pick your former habit if you dont have a strong will. It is strong will that helps us overcome difficulties. Besides, strong will can make you know what you are seeking for. Madam Curie experienced many times of failure during her study on radium. Newton was regarded as a fool. They gain confidence, bravery, and also achievements from their strong will. As you have seen, strong will plays an important role in life, so I say nothing succeeds without a strong will.,14 分,The humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. Ive done it hundreds of times”, illustrates the astonishing yet common occurrence that many people try hard to give up a bad habit but in vain. They fail because they lack a strong will. In fact, nothing succeeds without a strong will. Take Thomas Edison for example. He is well-known for his large number of inventions which were created through thousands of unsuccessful experiments. Had it not been for his strong will, he would have merely been wastin