读后续写The Hidden Treasure(公开课)

Continuation Writing 读后续写,Treasure,positive attitude,friendship,money,jewelry,love,knowledge,Reading,The Hidden Treasure,1. What was the hidden treasure? 2. How was it discovered?,Fast reading,4.What is the message conveyed in the passage?,2. Who are the characters involved?,1. Whats the style of the context?,3. Whats the hidden treasure?,Fast reading,2. Who are the characters involved?,1. Whats the style of the context?,A. Narration B. Argumentation C. Exposition,Old Man Donovan, Ann and I, and his family.,Narration,（记叙文） （议论文） (说明文),3. Whats the hidden treasure?,The sweet, kind heart.,4.What is the message conveyed in the passage?,Dont judge a heart until you know it.,1. What is the first treasure mentioned?,2. What did children do about his treasure?,3. What did Donovan do to the children who stole his fruit?,Read for comprehension,Para. 1-3,4. What was our attitude to him?,Read for comprehension,1. What is the first treasure mentioned?,2. What did children do about his treasure?,His beautiful fruit.,They, drawn by the fruit, stole it.,3. What did Donovan do to the children who stole his fruit?,He threw rocks and even shot at them.,We were influenced by the _.,4. What was our attitude to him?,rumors,negative,We held a _ attitude to him.,1. How did we go back home that day?,2. How did we feel when he stopped us?,Para. 4-5,3. How did we feel when he offered us apples?,1. How did we go back home that day?,We went home through his farm.,2. How did we feel when he stopped us?,We were extremely _.,frightened,3. How did we feel when he offered us apples?,We felt quite _.,surprised,Para. 6,1. What did we do together as time went on?,(1) He kept on ,(2) We talked to him for hours.,We were impressed with him by_.,communication,we,frightened,surprised,concerned,sweet, kind heart,Old Man,rumors misunderstood,experience got to know,communication understood,We took a _ attitude towards Old Man Donovan.,positive,Which of the following sentences can best convey the theme? A. A faithful friend is hard to find. B. Wisdom is more to be envied than riches. C. A human being can alter his life by altering attitudes.,Critical thinking,C. A human being can alter his life by altering attitudes.,D. The man proposes, the God disposes.,Unfortunately, his family never seemed to enjoy our company. They never smiled or welcomed us in.,negative,It can be inferred that his family had a _ attitude towards us.,Prediction,Advice: The ending should be positive.,Would the family change their attitude towards us as we altered our attitude to old man?,How?,Paragraph7: Every summer, we would visit Mr. Donovan and talk to him._,Continuation writing,Mr. Donovan We His family,illness,Paragraph8: The next winter, word got around thatOld Man Donovanhad died. _,attitude,Advice: make sure the story develops logically and reasonably.,Possible version,Every summer, we would visit Mr. Donovan and talk to him. He told us different kinds of stories we were fond of. But one summer, we heard that he was hospitalized because he was sick with his throat. Finding out that he was discharged from the hospital, we went to visit him right away. The family received us. When asked about his illness, they told us not to worry too much. When we were to leave , surprisingly, they offered us some luscious fruit and asked us to visit him as usual.,Paragraph8: The next winter, word got around thatOld Man Donovanhad died. _,we We His family,sadness attitude,Possible version,The next winter, word got around thatOld Man Donovanhad died. Hearing the bad news, Ann and I couldnt hold back our tears. We were heartbroken and decided to go to the funeral. When we got to the funeral, we saw a lot of familiar faces from the neighborhood. The family kindly greeted us and said they were so glad we had come. At the moment when we had to say goodbye to Mr. Donovan, our old friend, forever, we all wept mournfully, but our wonderful memories of him comforted us.,A successful story,message (positive),development (reasonable),(picturesque),language,sadness,We couldnt hold back our tears.,we all wept mournfully.,止不住眼泪,悲伤的哭泣,我们的心像针扎一样痛,We had pains of needles stabbing our hearts.,Advice: tell ones feelings by means of vivid description.,Continuation Writing,comprehension,language,development,read carefully,make sure the story develops logically and reasonably.,tell ones feelings by means of vivid description.,